Tuesday 9 September 2008

my fears and hopes for the next year

I thought that I will have some great idea about my hopes and fears for the next year. But is not possible! My only hope is finish this article! I wanted to start on weekend, but I couldn't! And now is Tuesday, I am writing this sentence and the dead-line is in 6 p.m.! UAAAA!!! I can't imagine worse situation. I am desperate.
So, my first seriously hope is: I hope my next homework will not be so difficult for me! I hope this bad situation was only because is start of new school year and last year was a big holiday = I am not abel to do something. I hope my study ability will be every day better and better..
Of course I hope I will finish III.G in our school, than I will graduate and everything will be all right. But about my graduated hopes I will write next year, Ok?
I fear that all of my hopes will not come true. I think it is brief, but I have to make Gafna happy, so I have MORE FEARS!!
I fear this year will not by so good like last year. It was a great year. Everything was great. I was so happy and every day was wonderful. I HOPE this year will be great too, but who knows?
I fear that my hight school live is going to finish and I don't want it! Really! I like it even so I hate homework, exams, teachers, school caretaker (and his comments), gymnstics, grammar and compulsory reading.



1 comment:

Gafna said...

Báro,
One can tell you didn´t like this task. It was probably very hard for you to write something on this topic. But you did a decent (quite good) job in the end. It was a pleasure to read it. I don´t like the fact that you didn´t divide your text into paragraphs. Otherwise, the structure of your essay is not bad, only – I would write one concluding paragraph. Now it looks like you just stopped writing in the middle of your thought.
Be careful with word classes serious x seriously; live x life

Good job!